苏门有一神人，

德如红日，照亮前程，暖心。

宏图如虹，闪耀天空……真神！

 

▲ 简短点评

 

全诗自然嵌入苏、德、宏三字，直白抒怀，情意真挚。以红日喻品德，温暖正大；以长虹喻志向，大气昂扬。言辞朴实热忱，满含欣赏敬佩，寥寥数语尽显人物胸襟气度，通俗易懂，朗朗入心。

 

▲ 英文翻译

 

Su Dehong

 

Author: Shuren (Writer, Hebei, China)

A remarkable man lives in the Su family.

His virtue is like the red sun, brightening the future and warming hearts.

His grand vision is like a rainbow, shining bright across the sky.

Truly an extraordinary person!