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赋诗如步入花烛夜
作者 苏德宏（中国山西）
每当深夜里，
挥舞笔作诗，
如款款布入洞房，
享受花烛夜之乐。
那种欢愉，
那种幸福，
那种快乐，
那种滋味，
谁人可知？
星星能知？
太阳可知？
莲花能知？
嫦娥才知！
月儿才知！
2026.06.12 题
一、英文翻译（兼顾诗意+口语韵律，分直译+文学译版）
版本1（文学诗意版，推荐，贴合诗歌意境）
Composing Poems Like Entering the Bridal Chamber
By Su Dehong (Shanxi, China)
Late into every night,
I wield my brush to write poems.
Stepping gently into the nuptial chamber,
I savour the bliss of a wedding night.
Such delight,
Such bliss,
Such joy,
Such sweet sensation—
Who can understand this feeling?
Do the stars know?
Does the sun know?
Does the lotus know?
Only the Moon Goddess knows!
Only the moon knows!
Written on June 12, 2026
版本2（通俗直译版，忠于原文字句）
Writing Poems as Walking into the Wedding Chamber
Author: Su Dehong (Shanxi, China)
Every night deep and still,
I pick up the brush and compose poetry.
I walk slowly into the bridal room,
and enjoy the joy of the wedding night.
The pleasure,
the happiness,
the delight,
the wonderful taste—
Who truly knows?
Do the stars know?
Does the sun know?
Does the lotus know?
Only Chang'e knows!
Only the moon knows!
二、英文点评（分简评+深度赏析，适合交流、投稿使用）
1. Brief Comment 简短点评（日常交流用）
This poem uses a vivid and distinctive metaphor. The author compares the joy of writing poems late at night to the happiness of a wedding night, fully expressing the deep love for poetry. With simple language and repeated questions at the end, it highlights the unique inner joy only poets can feel.
译文对照：
这首诗比喻新颖生动，作者将深夜作诗的愉悦比作新婚之夜的幸福，淋漓尽致地抒发了对诗歌的热爱。语言质朴直白，文末层层设问，凸显出诗人独有的内心意趣。
2. In-depth Appreciation 深度赏析（正式点评/文稿使用）
This lyrical work creates a bold and original artistic conception. The poet takes the most joyful moment in life—the wedding night—as a metaphor for the experience of creating poetry at midnight, turning the quiet work of writing into an intimate and delightful spiritual enjoyment.
The poem adopts plain, straightforward language without flowery phrases. Four parallel phrases consecutively depict the mixed happy feelings while writing poems, which is sincere and touching. A series of rhetorical questions from stars, the sun and lotus to Chang'e and the moon gradually narrows down the answer. It cleverly implies that the joy of poetic creation is a private spiritual pleasure, which can only be understood by those who devote themselves to writing and the quiet moon in the night sky.
The whole poem is sincere in emotion and unique in conception, showing the poet’s wholehearted devotion and heartfelt delight in poetry creation.
译文对照：
这首小诗立意大胆新颖。诗人以人生至乐的花烛之夜为喻，描摹深夜伏案作诗的心境，让清寂的笔墨创作，化作私密又酣畅的精神享受。
全诗语言浅白质朴，不事雕琢。连用四句排比铺陈作诗时的百般欢喜，情真意切。后文以星星、朝日、莲花层层发问，最终落点于嫦娥与明月，巧妙道出：吟诗之乐是独属于创作者的心灵秘境，唯有静夜明月与潜心笔墨之人方能懂得。
通篇情感真挚、喻象别致，尽显作者沉醉诗境、以诗为乐的赤诚之心。
