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什么是革命？
作者 苏德宏
革命军人，
革命事业，
革命战争，
革命斗争，
革命建设，
革命成功……
我的朋友们，
什么是革命？
投身解放事业，
就是革命！
投身煤炭事业，
就是革命！
投身国防事业，
就是革命！
投身农业事业，
就是革命！
投身教育事业，
就是革命！
投身医学事业，
就是革命！
投身环卫事业，
就是革命！
投身铁路事业，
就是革命！
投身石油事业，
就是革命！
投身经济事业，
就是革命！
投身信息事业，
就是革命！
投身科技事业，
就是革命！
……
父老乡亲们，
祖国的昌盛，
是你我之荣，
刻不能放松。
只有心连心，
去劈风斩浪，
风雨中同行，
才能见彩虹！
走！
快走！
走到世界前列！
让世界刮开眼皮，
重看中国！
跑！
快跑！
冲到世界前列！
让世界刮开眸子，
相待中国！
2026.06.11 题
一、英文翻译（忠于原文句式、节奏与立意，兼顾诗歌韵律）
What Is Revolution?
Author: Su Dehong
Revolutionary soldiers,
Revolutionary cause,
Revolutionary wars,
Revolutionary struggles,
Revolutionary construction,
Revolutionary victory...
My dear friends,
What is revolution?
To devote yourself to the cause of liberation,
That is revolution!
To devote yourself to the coal industry,
That is revolution!
To devote yourself to national defense,
That is revolution!
To devote yourself to agriculture,
That is revolution!
To devote yourself to education,
That is revolution!
To devote yourself to medicine,
That is revolution!
To devote yourself to sanitation work,
That is revolution!
To devote yourself to railway services,
That is revolution!
To devote yourself to the petroleum industry,
That is revolution!
To devote yourself to economic development,
That is revolution!
To devote yourself to information industry,
That is revolution!
To devote yourself to science and technology,
That is revolution!
……
Dear folks,
The prosperity of our motherland,
Is the glory of you and me.
We must never slack off.
Only when we stand united as one,
Brave wind and waves side by side,
Walk together through storms,
Can we behold the rainbow bright!
March on!
Hasten forward!
Strive to stand among the world's foremost.
Let the whole world open its eyes wide,
And see China anew!
Run ahead!
Race forward!
Dash to the forefront of the world.
Let the whole world gaze with fresh eyes,
And treat China with new respect!
June 11, 2026
二、作品点评
1. 立意解读
诗歌重新诠释了革命的内涵，跳出传统认知里革命仅代表战争、斗争的狭义理解，将各行各业爱岗敬业、为国奉献都定义为革命。点明新时代下，平凡岗位的坚守、为国建功都是革命精神的延续，格局开阔。
2. 结构与手法
开篇以一系列和“革命”相关的词汇铺陈，顺势抛出设问，引发思考；中间采用排比句式，逐一列举各行各业，句式整齐、气势连贯，层层强化主旨；后半段转向抒情与号召，节奏由舒缓转为激昂，层层递进，感染力极强。
3. 语言与情感
语言朴实直白、铿锵有力，没有华丽辞藻，通俗易懂，贴近大众。前半段理性阐释内涵，后半段抒发家国情怀，既赞美各行各业的建设者，又抒发了奋进图强、让祖国屹立于世界的壮志，情感真挚饱满，充满正能量与时代担当。
4. 主旨升华
全诗传递出一种理念：革命精神永不过时。个人的事业与国家命运紧紧相连，全民同心、携手奋进，方能实现国家强盛，彰显了家国同心、奋勇争先的时代精神。
