精华热点 中英双语江南新感觉派微诗《清秋》九首
作者：季俊群（巴西）
一.清秋
季俊群/巴西
枫叶满地，杯沿凝了薄凉
那盏陈茶
替我接住记忆里的半片月光
二.清秋
季俊群/巴西
雁字已回，抖落经年旧事
黄花点点
化作一抹晚风中的远山
三.清秋
季俊群/巴西
白露在无边黄昏，凝结
月色皎洁
缝补着，落满旧庭院的碎花
四.清秋
季俊群/巴西
雁影一掠，天幕退向无垠
极目处
——尽是，众山收容的薄凉
五.清秋
季俊群/巴西
衣襟裹紧，仍漏下几缕天寒
寂寥一鸣——
远山，遂从黄昏深处醒来
六.清秋
季俊群/巴西
风，摇不响纺车，红枫
燃亮了——
眸子深处，依然是娘当年模样
七.清秋
季俊群/巴西
任凭枯枝摇曳寒风，月色轻叩
虚掩柴门
谁剪碎影，缝补游子的衣裳
八.清秋
季俊群/巴西
芦花染白，西风吹散指尖微澜
那声低唤
咽成，今夜流向远方的河
九清秋
季俊群/巴西
寒蝉切切，终锯不落残叶
桂香弥漫
剥开了，叠进旧信笺的琥珀
【诗人简介】又名裘俊群、季军群，笔名：拓荒者、子禾，浙江青田县裘山人，旅居巴西，中国诗歌学会会员，凤凰美洲总社社长。作品散见于《人民日报》《中国诗歌》《中国诗人生日大典》《中国当代诗歌大辞典》《东北亚新闻》《世界日报》等。获2017年度程丽娥写作联盟云帆群星大赛十大文学银星奖；获2022年第九届星际诗人奖（十佳华语诗人）。
Nine Micro-Poems of Jiangnan Neo-Sensation School: Clear Autumn
Author: Ji Junqun (Brazil)
1.Clear Autumn
Ji Junqun / Brazil
Maple leaves carpet the ground, a faint chill clings to the cup rim
That aged tea
Catches half a slice of moonlight from my memories
2.Clear Autumn
Ji Junqun / Brazil
Wild geese have returned, shaking off old tales of bygone years
Yellow chrysanthemums dot the fields
Turning into a stretch of distant hills in the evening breeze
3.Clear Autumn
Ji Junqun / Brazil
White dew congeals in the boundless dusk
Moonlight, pure and bright
Mends scattered blossoms strewn across the old courtyard
4.Clear Autumn
Ji Junqun / Brazil
A wild goose's shadow sweeps past, the sky recedes into endlessness
As far as eyes can reach
All is the faint chill the surrounding hills have held
5.Clear Autumn
Ji Junqun / Brazil
I wrap my robe tight, yet a few threads of cold still seep through
A single lonely cry —
And distant hills wake from the depth of dusk
6.Clear Autumn
Ji Junqun / Brazil
The wind cannot rattle the spinning wheel, yet red maple leaves
Light up —
Deep in my eyes, it is still mother's face from those years
7.Clear Autumn
Ji Junqun / Brazil
Let dead branches sway in the cold wind, moonlight taps gently
On the half-latched wooden gate
Who cuts the shadows to mend the wanderer's clothes
8.Clear Autumn
Ji Junqun / Brazil
Reed catkins turn white, the west wind scatters faint ripples at my fingertips
That soft call
Chokes into a river flowing far away tonight
9.Clear Autumn
Ji Junqun / Brazil
Cicadas chirp sharply, yet they can never saw off the last remaining leaves
Osmanthus scent spreads far and wide
Unwraps the amber tucked in the old letter paper
Poet Profile: Also known as Qiu Junqun and Ji Junqun, with pen names Pioneerer and Zihe. Born in Qiushan, Qingtian County, Zhejiang Province, now residing in Brazil. Member of the Chinese Poetry Association, President of Phoenix Americas General Agency. His works have been published in People's Daily, Chinese Poetry, Chinese Poet's Birthday Ceremony, Grand Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese Poetry, Northeast Asia News, World Daily and other publications. He won the Top Ten Literary Silver Star Award at the 2017 Cheng Li'e Writing Alliance Yunfan Stars Competition, and the 9th Interstellar Poet Award (Top Ten Chinese-language Poets) in 2022.
这组《清秋》九首微诗以江南新感觉派的细腻笔触，把清秋意象和游子乡愁深度融合，每一首都有独属的出彩表达，以下是分首简评：
各首出彩简评
第一首
核心亮点：以“杯沿薄凉”“陈茶接月光”的微观细节入笔，把抽象的怀旧情绪具象化，清冷秋意和柔软记忆自然交融。
第二首
核心亮点：归雁抖落经年旧事的拟人化处理极富动感，黄花点点晕染成晚风里的远山，完成从细碎意象到开阔意境的顺滑跳转。
第三首
核心亮点：赋予月色“缝补碎花”的温柔动作，把白露黄昏里的旧庭院乡愁写得极具画面温度，清冷秋景里藏着细腻的怀旧暖意。
第四首
核心亮点：雁影掠过后天幕退向无垠，以众山收容薄凉收束，用极简的空间留白，写出清秋时刻天地间漫溢的空旷寂寥感。
第五首
核心亮点：以衣襟漏寒的细微体感铺垫，借一声寂寥的鸣响唤醒远山，把静态秋景写出动态的苏醒感，氛围感瞬间拉满。
第六首
核心亮点：红枫燃亮眼眸的意象极具冲击力，风摇不动纺车的细节锚定江南旧时光，落点稳稳落在对母亲的深切思念上，情感真挚动人。
第七首
核心亮点：月色轻叩虚掩柴门的场景自带故事感，“剪碎影缝补游子衣裳”的想象，把故乡对游子的牵挂写得具象可触。
第八首
核心亮点：芦花染白指尖微澜的画面感极强，把亲人的低唤咽成流向远方的河，让无形的乡愁有了绵延流动的载体。
第九首
核心亮点：寒蝉锯不落残叶的细节充满巧思，桂香剥开旧信笺里的琥珀，把封存多年的旧时光具象成可感知的香气，余味悠长。
整体出彩特质
整组诗统一以清秋的薄凉底色托举游子乡愁，每首各取一个微观切口，意象连贯又各有新意，完全贴合江南新感觉派以细腻感官捕捉情绪的创作特质。（百度）
