醉太平·丝绸之路

（中华新韵）

天宜居士

新疆美岫。

神山雪透。

彩云飘动现龙首。

圣峰湖水秀。

茫茫大漠孤烟否。

驼铃声脆凭谁佑。

我欲同君与沙斗。

共胡杨不朽。

题记：赴新疆，重走丝绸之路，有感而作。

（作者简介:天宜居士，本名夏金峣，贵州人，欧洲大学工商管理博士。北京大学未名湖文学社签约作家。)

点评：

当代词人天宜居士的这首词以《醉太平》写重走“丝绸之路”，上片如画，下片如歌。它从新疆神山、雪峰、彩云、湖水写起，转入大漠、孤烟、驼铃、风沙、胡杨，最终落在“不朽”二字。表面写丝路重走，深层则写文明记忆的复苏与坚韧精神的传承。全词短小而有气象，清丽中见豪迈，是一首兼具地域风光、历史情怀与时代精神的佳作。敬呈解析如下。

一、题记解析

“赴新疆，重走丝绸之路，有感而作。”

题记交代写作缘起：地点是新疆，事件是“重走丝绸之路”，动机是“有感”。其中“重走”二字最见精神——它不是单纯记游，而是以当代人身份回溯汉唐丝路，进行古今对话。新疆是古丝路要冲，也是今日“一带一路”核心区，因此题记使全词具有现实旅行、历史追怀与文明传承三重维度。

二、逐句解析

上片：写新疆山川之圣洁秀美

1. 新疆美岫。

“岫”本指峰峦、山谷，古雅而有画意。“新疆”直接入词，带有当代语汇色彩，与“岫”形成古今交融。此句四字，短促有力，开篇即点明地域，以“美”字定下赞美基调，如镜头航拍，先见山川总体之貌。

2. 神山雪透。

“神山”承“美岫”而来，可指昆仑山、天山、阿尔泰山等新疆雪山，也赋予自然以神圣感。“雪透”之“透”字锤炼极佳：既写积雪晶莹透彻，又写雪光穿透云层、寒气透骨。四字与上句同格，由山形写到山色，由“美”入“神”。

3. 彩云飘动现龙首。

彩云飘动，是动态；龙首忽现，是比喻。可理解为云形如龙首，也可理解为雪峰蜿蜒如龙首，甚至暗含中华龙脉、祥瑞之象。“现”字有瞬间感，云开龙现，气象飞动，使上片由静景转入灵动。

4. 圣峰湖水秀。

“圣峰”与“神山”互文，再次强调新疆山水的神圣性。“湖水”可泛指天池、赛里木湖、喀纳斯湖等，不必坐实。“秀”字收束上片，与“美”“神”“圣”“龙”相呼应，形成清丽、圣洁、灵秀的山水境界。上片四句，从山到雪，从云到湖，空间由高到低，色彩由白到彩，动静相生。

下片：写丝路历史之苍茫与精神之不朽

5. 茫茫大漠孤烟否。

此句化用王维“大漠孤烟直，长河落日圆”。“茫茫”叠字，写沙漠无垠；“孤烟”是边塞经典意象，可为烽烟、炊烟或狼烟。“否”字作设问，问大漠是否还有孤烟？这一问，使历史画面若隐若现，也暗示古今变迁：昔日烽烟已远，今日重走丝路，别有一番太平气象。

6. 驼铃声脆凭谁佑。

“驼铃”是丝路最具代表性的听觉符号，“声脆”以声音写空寂，有“鸟鸣山更幽”之效。此句由视觉转入听觉，写商旅驼队穿越沙漠。“凭谁佑”是设问：古丝路艰险，商旅、使者、僧侣靠谁护佑？是家国、信仰、文明，还是同行者？这一问，使下片由写景怀古转入抒情言志。

7. 我欲同君与沙斗。

“我”出现，抒情主体正式登场。“同君”之“君”，可指同行友人，也可指古人、读者，甚至拟人化的丝路。“与沙斗”三字极有豪情：沙既实指风沙大漠，也虚指艰难、时间与历史湮没。此句是对“凭谁佑”的回答——不徒然等待护佑，而是主动与风沙搏斗，与艰难抗争，体现当代人重走丝路、传承开拓的精神。

8. 共胡杨不朽。

胡杨是新疆沙漠的象征，有“生而千年不死，死而千年不倒，倒而千年不朽”之说。“共胡杨不朽”将人的精神与胡杨的生命力合一：个体生命有限，但丝路精神、开拓精神、坚韧精神可以不朽。“共”字尤妙，人与自然共，今人与古人共，个体与文明共。全词在此收束，由景入志，由历史入精神，余韵雄浑。

三、综合鉴赏

1. 结构：上景下情，时空转换

上片写新疆自然山川，以“美岫—雪透—彩云—龙首—圣峰—湖水”构成高远、圣洁、灵秀的空间；下片写丝路历史与精神，以“大漠—孤烟—驼铃—沙—胡杨”构成苍茫、艰险、坚韧的时间纵深。上片偏静美，下片偏豪壮；上片是空间铺展，下片是历史追怀与主体行动。

2. 意象：丝路长廊的符号系统

“雪、云、龙、湖”写新疆的神圣秀美；“大漠、孤烟、驼铃、胡杨”写丝路的苍茫与不朽。其中“龙首”有中华祥瑞意味，“驼铃”是丝路交流符号，“胡杨”是坚韧精神象征。色彩上有雪白、彩云、黄沙、金胡杨；声音上有驼铃之脆；触觉上有与沙相斗。多感官交织，画面开阔。

3. 修辞：化用、设问、象征

“大漠孤烟否”化用王维名句，但以“否”字翻新，化肯定为疑问，使古今对照。“凭谁佑”设问，引出“我欲同君与沙斗”的豪情回答。“与沙斗”有拟人、夸张；“共胡杨不朽”是象征，将自然物升华为精神图腾。

4. 精神：丝路精神与胡杨精神

此词不止赞美新疆风光，更在追怀丝路。古丝路是和平合作、开放包容、互学互鉴、互利共赢之路；胡杨则象征艰苦奋斗、自强不息、扎根边疆、甘于奉献。结尾“共胡杨不朽”将个人游感提升为文明传承，呼应今日“一带一路”背景下的新时代丝路精神。

四、 总评

这是一首当代边塞词、丝路词。以神山圣湖为起点，以丝路驼铃为历史回声，以胡杨不朽为精神终点。它把新疆的自然之美、丝路的历史之远、奋斗的意志之坚熔于一炉。上片清丽高远，下片豪迈深沉；由“圣岫”入题，由“不朽”收束，完成了一次从风景到历史、从历史到精神、从“我”到“我们”的远征。其动人处，不在摹景之细，而在以景立骨、以古开今、以胡杨明志。全词短小而有气象，既有古典词韵，又有当代情怀，堪称“重走丝路”的佳作。

Drunk and Peace. The Silk Road

(Chinese New Romance)

A paradise of paradise

Meijin, Xinjiang.

The mountain of God is covered in snow.

The colorful clouds moved the dragon's head.

The waters of Lake Superior are beautiful.

Is there no lone smoke in the desert?

Who can help make the hump sound?

I want to fight with the king and the sand.

Along with the hyenas, we will live forever.

When I went to Xinjiang, I went back to the Silk Road, and I was inspired.

(Introduction: Tian Yisheng, real name Xia Jinji, a native of Guizhou, PhD in Business Administration at European University.) Peking University does not have a signed writer for the unnamed HKU literary society. )

Comments:

The phrase by contemporary poet Tian Yizhi Shi revisited the "Silk Road" with "Drunk Calm," with the first part as a picture and the second as a song. It begins with Xinjiang's mountains, snow peaks, colored clouds, lake water, transitions to the desert, lone smoke, camel bells, wind sand, and hyacinth, and finally falls on the word "immortal." On the surface, it is written about the renewed journey of the Silk Road, and on the deep side, it is about the revival of civilization's memory and the inheritance of the resilience spirit. The whole word is short and remarkable, and the beauty of it reveals grandeur. It is a great work that combines regional scenery, historical sentiment and the spirit of the times. The explanation of the tribute is as follows.

I. Analysis of the thesis

"Going to Xinjiang and going back to the Silk Road, I feel very moved."

The title explains the origin of the writing: the location is Xinjiang, the event is "re-walking the Silk Road" and the motive is "feeling." Among them, the word "re-walking" is the most spiritual - it is not simply to remember travels, but to trace the Silk Road back to the Han and Tang as a contemporary and engage in a dialogue between ancient and modern times. Xinjiang is a major fountainhead of the ancient Silk Road and the core area of the "One Belt, One Road" today, so the title gives the whole term three dimensions of real travel, historical nostalgia and civilization inheritance.

II. Parsing sentence by sentence

Previous film: Writing about the holiness and beauty of the mountains and rivers of Xinjiang

1. Meijin, Xinjiang.

"岫" means mountains and valleys, quaint and picturesque.The term "Xinjiang" is entered directly into the phrase, with a contemporary vocabulary, and the term "岫" forms an intermingling between ancient and modern times.This four-word sentence is short and powerful. It begins by indicating the geographical area and setting the tone of praise with the word "beauty," such as aerial photography to see the general look of the mountains and rivers.

2. The mountain of God is covered in snow.

"God Mountain" comes from "Meishan," which can refer to Xinjiang snow mountains such as Kunlun, Tianshan, Altai Mountain and other snow mountains, and also gives nature a sense of divinity. The word "snow through" is perfectly tested: it describes both the crystalline accumulation of snow and the snowlight penetrating the clouds and the cold through the bones. The four words are identical to the last sentence, written from Yamagata to mountain color, and from "beauty" to "god."

3. The colorful clouds moved the dragon's head.

The colorful clouds move and are dynamic. The sudden appearance of the dragon's head is a metaphor. It can be understood as a cloud shape like the head of a dragon, or as a snow peak winding like the head, even implying the Chinese dragon line and a symbol of redemption. The word "present" has a momentary sense, and the clouds open and the weather changes, turning the upper part from a still scene into a spiritual one.

4. The waters of Lake Superior are beautiful.

The words "Holy Peak" and "Divine Mountain" exchange words, once again stressing the sacredness of the mountains and rivers of Xinjiang. "Lake water" can refer to Tianji, Lake Serim, Lake Kaunas, etc., and does not have to sit on the ground. The word "show" takes hold of the above film, echoing "beauty," "god," "holy," and "dragon," forming a landscape of beauty, holiness, and spiritual beauty. In the preceding four sentences, from the mountain to the snow, from the cloud to the lake, the space is from high to low, the color is from white to color, and the motion is born.

Next film: Writing about the long history and spiritual immortality of the Silk Road

5. Is there no lone smoke in the desert?

This sentence is translated as Wang Wei's "The desert is full of lone smoke, and the long river is full of sun." The "vast" superposition means that the desert is endless; "Lone smoke" is a classic borderline image and can be a smoke of a railway, stove or wolf smoke. The word "no" asks whether there is still lone smoke in the desert. This question, which makes the historical picture evaporate, also implies the changes of the past and the present: the smoke in the past is gone, but today the Silk Road is once again visited, and there is a different kind of peace.

6. Who can help make the hump sound?

"The camel bell" is the most representative acoustic symbol of the Silk Road, and "sound crisp" writes empty silence by sound, having the effect of "birds singing mountains are more ghostly." The sentence moves from visual to auditory. The writer writes that the caravan of camels travels across the desert. "By whom?" is the question: The ancient Silk Road was dangerous, and by whom did the merchants, messengers, and monks rely? Is it a home country, a faith, a civilization, or a companion? This question shifted the next section from writing about ancient times to a lonely speech.

7. I want to fight with the king and the sand.

"I" appeared, and the subject of the poetry officially appeared. The "gentleman" of the "fellow gentleman" may refer to a friend who is traveling with you, or to an ancient person, a reader, or even a humanized Silk Road. The word "fight with sand" is very proud: sand really refers to the desert, but also to difficulty, time and history. This sentence is the answer to "by whom?" - not waiting for help, but taking the initiative to fight the storm and struggle with difficulties, reflecting the spirit of modern people to resume the Silk Road and carry forward pioneering efforts.

8. Along with the hyenas, we will live forever.

Huyang is a symbol of the Xinjiang desert. There is a saying that "living for a thousand years does not die, dying for a million years doesn't fall, falling for thousand years is immortal." "Together with Huyang for immortality" combines human spirit with the vital force of Huyang: individual life is limited, but the spirit of the Silk Road, the spirit of pioneering, and the spirit of tenacity can be immortalized. The word "community" is especially wonderful: people are communicated with nature, people today are comminicated with ancient people, individuals are compunicated with civilization. The whole word here is bound up, from the scene to the philosophy, from the history to the spirit, and the rest of the rhyme is powerful.

III. Comprehensive appreciation

1. Structure: Above and below, space-time transition

The previous film describes the natural mountains and rivers of Xinjiang, which constitute lofty, holy and spiritual spaces with "beautiful mountains - snow - colorful clouds - dragon head - sacred peaks - lake water." The next section writes about the history and spirit of the Silk Road, which constitutes a vast, dangerous and resilient depth of time consisting of "the desert - lone smoke - the camel bell - the sand - the hyacinth." The upper part is quiet and beautiful, the lower part is proud. The upper film is a space exposition, the lower film is historical remembrance and main action.

2. Image: The symbol system of the Silk Road promenade

"Snow, cloud, dragon, lake" describes the sacred beauty of Xinjiang. "The desert, the lone smoke, the camelbell, and the hyacinth" describe the long and immortal nature of the Silk Road. Among them, the "dragon head" has the meaning of Chinese redemption, the "moan bell" is a symbol of Silk Road communication, and the "Hu Yang" is another symbol of tenacity. The colors are snow white, colored clouds, yellow sand, and golden hyacinth; The sound is as crisp as a camel's bell. I feel fighting sand on my tongue. Multiple senses are intertwined and the picture is broad.

3. Rhetoric: utility, questioning, symbolism

"The desert lonely smoke is no" is a translation of Wang Wei's quotation, but it is rewritten with the word "no," which is certainly a question, making ancient and modern times a contrast. The question, "By whose grace?" led to a proud answer, "I would like to fight with the king and the sand." "Fighting with sand" is compelling and exaggerated; "The immortality of the hyacinth" is a symbol of the sublimation of natural objects into spiritual totems.

4. Spirit: The Silk Road Spirit and the Huyan Spirit

This word not only celebrates the scenery of Xinjiang, but also remembers the Silk Road. The ancient Silk Road is the road of peace, cooperation, openness and inclusiveness, mutual learning and win-win results. The hyacinth is a symbol of hard work, perseverance in self-improvement, rooting in the frontier, and willingness to give. The end of the poem, "Together with the Huiyang for immortality," elevates the personal sense of travel to the inheritance of civilization, echoing the Silk Road spirit of the new era in the context of today's "One Belt, One Road."

IV. Overall assessment

This is a contemporary crossword, a silk word. It takes the sacred mountain as the starting point, the silk road camel bell as the historical echo, and the immortality of the hyacinth as the spiritual end. It has melted the natural beauty of Xinjiang, the historical distance of the Silk Road, and the strength of the will to strive in one stove. The last film was gorgeous and far-reaching, the next film was bold and ambitious. Titled "the sacred rock" and bound by "immortality," it completed an expedition from landscape to history, from history to spirituality, from "I" to "we." What makes it fascinating is not to copy the details of the scenery, but to build the bones with the scenery; to open up the present with the ancient; and to make sense of the willows. The whole word is short and beautiful, with both classical rhyme and contemporary sentiment, and can be called the best work of "re-walking the Silk Road."

秋夜的怀想

韦元龙

我必须赶在太阳落山之前

赶在月亮没有爬上高高的峰巅

走近你

走近那片熟悉的草园

在我茫然无度的时候

想你  静静地想你

就是一种幸福的依念

曾经记起很多光阴

都付与流水与落叶

曾经记起很多名字

面孔都消逝在大脑的边沿

曾经几次梦中叨念过你

你却在晚霞的勾勒中款款而现

我们就这样相逢了

邂逅是命运唯一的偶然

不必说朝霞暗示希望

不必说旭日是青春的力量

牵着你的手以后

我就必须恪守一份刚强

恪守昼夜交替时分的太阳和月亮

我必须赶在太阳落山之前

与你一起温抚月亮的脸

月圆   是我们的爱恋

月缺  是我们的思念

（作者简介 ：韦元龙，文艺工作者。鲁院学员，北大、清华校友，未名湖文学社社长，未名湖艺术研究所、燕园书画研究院秘书长，中国龙网总编辑，民族传媒社长。）

A wistful autumn night

Wei Yuanlong

I must hurry before the sun goes down

When the moon didn't climb the high summit,

Come close to you.

Close to the familiar meadow

When I was distracted,

I miss you. I miss you quietly.

It's just a happiness mantra.

I used to remember a lot of times

All pay and the water and the leaves

I used to remember many names.

Faces vanish on the edge of the brain

I've thought about you in my dreams several times.

You are talking in the outline of the evening sun.

That's how we met.

The encounter is the only accident of fate.

Needless to say that the sunset hinted at hope.

Needless to say that the sunrise is the power of youth.

After holding your hand,

I must remain a strongman.

Always observe the sun and moon at the time of day and night

I must hurry before the sun goes down

Comfort the face of the moon with you.

A full moon is our love.

A moon shortage is our thoughts.

(Author profile: Wei Yuanlong, art worker.) A student at Lu Yuan, an alumnus of Peking University and Tsinghua University, president of the Weiming Lake Literature Society, secretary-general of the Yan Garden Calligraphy and Painting Research Institute, chief editor of China Dragon Network, and publisher of Ethnic Media.）

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