
2026年11月5日中译英挑战

鹧鸪天·冬过赛里木湖
刘军(新疆伊犁)
欲入关山马不前,
冰堤玉岸裹银川。
一泓云影蓝融碧,
万壑松锋雪带寒。
明月缺,夕阳残。
牧归隘口起苍烟。
曾经诗画寻仙境,
那景能吟怀旧篇?
吕文澎 译
A Visit to Sayram Lake in Winter—To the Tune of Partridges in the Sky
Tr. LYU Wenpeng
Through passes and hills my horse wouldn’t go;
Ice dams and jade shores wrap the lake aglow.
A pool of cloud shadows blends blue and green;
Vales and dales see pines in snow like swords keen.
Waning moon and dying sun close the day.
Herdsmen return, at the pass smoke curls gray.
In verse and painting I sought fairyland;
Can’t this scene inspire an old verse so grand?
舒恩江 译
Tune: Partridge in the Sky
— Visiting Sayram Lake in Winter
By LIU Jun (Yili, Xinjiang)
Tr. SHU Enjiang
I seek the frontier pass, yet my horse won't advance;
Jade banks of ice enfold the silver expanse.
Cloud shadows pool where blue and emerald blend;
Through countless gorges, snow-crowned pines ascend.
The moon wanes thin, the sun sinks low;
Through th' narrow pass, grey mists with herdsmen go.
In verse and painting I sought a fairy shore,
Can that scene stir a nostalgic strain once more?
作者简介
刘军,现为中华诗词学会会员、新疆诗词学会副会长,伊犁州诗词学会党建指导员。多次在《中华诗词》《诗刊》等刊物发表作品。2009年发表《沧浪集》。
LIU Jun, member of the Chinese Poetry Society, vice president of the Xinjiang Poetry Society, and Party-building instructor of the Ili Prefecture Poetry Society. His works have appeared many times in Chinese Poetry, Poetry, and other journals. In 2009 he published Collection of Blue Waters. (吕文澎 译)

译者简介
吕文澎,甘肃省天水人,西北师范大学副教授,硕士生导师,传统文化翻译与国际传播专业委员会、中国先秦史学会国学双语研究会及甘肃省翻译工作者协会理事,研究方向为应用语言学、译者行为研究与典籍翻译研究。
Biosketch of the Translator
LYU Wenpeng, a native of Tianshui, Gansu Province; Associate Professor of English and MA Supervisor at Northwest Normal University, Director of Chinese Culture Translation and International Promotion Committee, of Chinese Classics Bilinguals' Association, and of Gansu Provincial Translators' Association. She specializes in applied linguistics and studies of translator behavior and of translation of Chinese classics.
译者简介
舒恩江,浙江新昌人。翻译专业资格考试英语二级,高中英语高级教师,“开心挑战中译英”微信群群主,个人微信公众号“天姥英语桥”。本人喜欢旅游、摄影、英语教学、以译会友。
Translator's Profile
Shu Enjiang, a native of Xinchang County, Zhejiang Province, holds a CATTI Level 2 Certificate in English Translation and is a Senior High School English Teacher. He founded the WeChat group "Joyful Challenge: Chinese-to-English Translation" and runs the personal WeChat official account "Tianmu English Bridge". Passionate about traveling, photography and English teaching & learning, he enjoys making friends through translation.





