红楼梦第六十一回综括词
文／张从安
1. 贺圣朝·硝火惊变
泼翻艾醋硝香处。轰燃瓷釜。赵姨惊跳踩裙裾，落簪烧鹭。
平儿展卷，冰眸扫雾，案情无传府。且将霜露赠蝉蛉，塞了金钏去。
2. 鹧鸪天·冰炭同盅
霜烬偷藏芍药中。露瓶暗葬菊花丛。
彩云捧出玫瑰盏，麝月轻遮掩卷宗。
硝烟散，醋痕封。平儿笑点水晶盅。
炭冰原难同觚煮，何苦焚园争蠹虫。
红楼梦第六十二回
1. 临江仙•湘云醉卧
花影摇红春睡足，湘云醉卧芳茵。鲛绡帕裹玉麟存。蝶蜂争绕梦，榴艳透新痕。
忽见茜裙溅脂粉，沁芳桥畔烟云。却羞那、汗透罗裙。情丝绕指处，泪眼烧黄昏。
2. 行香子•香菱解带
茜袂焦焦，泪目昭昭。香菱解、带急如烧。榴花溅血，脂粉红腰。宝玉轻唤，婢女换，避人瞧。
甄家旧事，魂牵梦绕。却道评、冤孽难逃。情天恨海，付与波涛。又薄命司，判词应，泪难消。
3. 唐多令•群芳夜宴
烛影泣摇红。笑声飘远空。看湘云、醉卧芳丛。鬓乱钗横娇乏力，宝钗遇、牡丹风。
探春掷骰红。黛玉怜柳浓。却惊那、繁梦华穷。命运无常东逝水，三春去，落芳踪。
红楼梦第六十三回
1. 鹧鸪天•湘云醉眠
花影摇红醉玉魂。湘云卧石梦留痕。
鲛绡帕裹金麟隐，蝶粉蜂黄染茜裙。
香汗透，粉脂温，沁芳桥畔水云昏。
忽惊风雨摧榴艳，淋湿繁华誓未真。
2. 一丛花•香菱解带
茜裙焦皱泪痕频。宽带急如焚。榴花溅血胭脂染，看宝玉、唤婢更巾。甄家旧往，魂牵梦绕，观鬼哭号因。
司签薄命早应真。因果付红尘。情天恨海波涛涌，正应那、判谶词文。并蒂荷花，凝霜残影，旧梦已难温。
3. 眼儿媚•群芳夜宴
清影摇红夜宴深。笑语乱芳心。湘云醉卧，钗横鬓乱，梦绕香衾。
探春掷骰桃花信，黛玉奏瑶琴。繁华梦短，无常命运，化作诗吟。
红楼梦第六十四回
1. 扬州慢•湘云醉酒
红雨飞香，青岩枕玉，湘云醉倒芳茵。任蜂喧蝶扰，抱鲛帕酣醺。茜裙皱、胭脂半染，榴花溅血，沁水惊魂。忽风来、凉透罗裳，残照当门。
当年甄府，画船灯、空对金樽。叹飘梗萍踪，香菱旧事，俱化烟云。薄命司中签语，谁能避、泪渍啼痕。待群芳星散，空枝独对黄昏。
2. 诉衷情令•香菱解裙
焦痕蓦地染罗裙。解带泪先纷。忽惊榴血红透，犹似旧伤痕。
灯影落，月光昏。葬花魂。
婢更新绢，宝鼎焚香，难赎前尘。
3. 小重山•群芳夜宴
绛烛摇红夜宴醺。湘云眠芍药，吐兰芬。芳官舞破石榴裙。惊弦断，偏唱孽尘恩。
花语谶签真。探春抽杏谱，别朱门。潇湘泪溅夭桃纹。三春尽，空苑葬花魂。
红楼梦第六十五回
1. 破阵子•偷娶悲谶
双调六十二字，前后段各五句三平韵
风卷绮罗夜蔽（仄），
风卷绮罗夜蔽， 香焚秘阁春藏。 槛外新人簪假凤， 榻侧寒锋隐冷霜。二爷偷拜堂。
泪浸胭脂色褪， 杯停玉箸声凉。 三姐横波摧腐蠹， 一剑明心照烈肠。谶悲透寂窗。
2. 行香子•尤姝断魂
金屋妆成，孽海舟横。 掩重门、雀替吞声。 画梁尘堕，锦帐寒生。 叹一人悲，一人笑，一人惊。
茜裙翻雪，蛾眉淬剑。 掷琼卮、裂帛雷霆。 耻蠹魂断，浊世心澄。 看灯将烬，夜将彻、泪成冰。
3. 蝶恋花•剑证三生
秘誓哪知藏鸩酒。芍药埋香，罗带翻成咒。獭髓空遮新妇袖。风尘偏染冰绡皱。
忽见寒光冲牖透。三姐抬眸，星迸山河骤。万古贞心凝剑吼。来生休向侯门叩。
红楼梦第六十六回
1. 满江红•雪溅鸳鸯剑
孽海风湍，忽破散、菱洲烟月。谁可料、赤绳青锋缠，系成冤结。 玉魄五年焚镜誓，霜刀一横崩桃血。看人间、弱骨碎寒潭，冰绡裂。
金堂宴，笙歌彻。侯门垢，难湔雪。又叹金龟婿，锦冠袍喋。冷眼忽惊脂粉狱，铁衣骤遁荒山穴。剩空鞘、泣夜挑寒灯，残魂灭。
2. 喝火令•断情天仙庵
泪尽菱枝槁， 香销孽镜昏。五年痴守玉楼春。 揉碎桃花千瓣， 腥雨溅侯门。
悔系鸳鸯剑， 羞窥艳粉痕。束发披缁断人伦。冷了星眸， 冷了月黄昏。冷了石榴云液， 破衲葬孤魂。
3. 天仙子•冷遁青埂峰
一剑捅开风月窟。万艳同渠流紫血。忽惊瓦灶煮胭脂，金簪折。琼笏裂。 冷眼遁居洪荒穴。
铁笛吹寒星髓结。鹤氅拂丢金龟屑。前生本是补天岩，情字灭。情孽绝。 夜夜空山听石碣。
红楼梦第六十七回
1. 玉蝴蝶•宝钗赠殓
薛蟠归舶香堆。异锦塞箱帷。暗忖故园薇。分奁赠颦妃。
绫禽针线巧，泥偶蜡脂肥。惊见缟裳垂。冷烟凝旧闺。
2. 定风波•凤姐设彀
笑索铜奁问旺儿。甜瓜渍露诱童厮。骤变脸翻雷霆乍。拷打！惊堂木裂夜乌啼。
巧借二姨铺暗阱。吞影！银釭照处血蛛丝。轿马悄抬穿月巷。 罗网！侯门新锁断肠墀。
3. 行香子•暗潮叠生
土物牵愁，殓帕惊眸。颦卿泣、独葬深秋。薛蟠懵懂，宝姊机谋。赠虎丘泥，金陵绣，广陵绸。
凤帷雷动，童奴胆颤，讯兴儿、裂帛声幽。巧言设陷，软轿藏钩。正一张网，两行泪，
满城蜉。
红楼梦第六十八回
1. 雨霖铃•赚入园彀
青帘掩挂。锁重门隙，泪渍罗帕。侯门忽开鬼域，貂裘笑挽，亲称嫡娅。竹篓盛菟设彀，断肠避风厦。拭假泪、禅髻金簪，血口吞羊咒星卦。
宁府骤闯雷霆乍。裂华堂、翠珥纷飞射。哭嚎滚地求恕，脂粉面、缠撕谩骂。祖上仙灵，
偷娶欺天，罪孽当剐。冷眼觑、傀儡提丝，夜漏燔银蜡。
2. 醉花阴•狼窟藏娇
暖阁乍迎酸泪哽。同侍夫子幸。暗遣恶奴围，茶饭添鸠，笑捧堕胎杏。
秋桐夜骂寒砧应。月照吞金井。绣户锁香魂，风透蕉纱，鬼唱槐烟影。
3. 冤三三•宁府受辱
悲堂锦帐卷尸衾。鬓乱金沉。醋凤撕嚎裂绣襟。唾珍兽、喷官阴。
尤娘瑟缩寒禽。孽缘起、谁援溺襟。逆孽罪深深。剜心强笑、炙骨冰音。
红楼梦第六十九回
1. 水龙吟•金环咽月
霜刀暗磨秋桐刃，血溅侯门深闭。 胭脂拭尽，男胎碎殒，恨凝鲛泪。 魇语如锥，夜剜心骨，绣帘垂死。 看金环咽月，吞声哽断，喉间语、花前醉。
孽镜台前青袂。照清冰、骸寒风祭。 凤钗斜堕，笑藏蛇信， 艾烟焚秽。 怒责苍冥，
茜香魂路，赤沙盈泪。半黄鲛帕烬， 犹沾尸裹，胭脂盈涕。
2. 薄幸•吞金断魂
泪池干竭。锁绮户、蛛尘绞结。秋桐唾、晨昏焚帛，悍仆饭馊汤劣。对菱花、枯骨簪花，男胎血浸罗衾雪。听鼠啮雕梁，乌啼枯井，暗数三更残月。
握金珥、心间冷，慢咽这、侯门腐孽。黄泉路休探，正脂香灭，算来生莫依朱阙。草埋寒骨。剩半幅鲛绡，胭脂味艳刀锋发。尸裹犹沾，凤姐指尖毒热。
3. 江城梅花引•哭灵迷局
假嚎灵柩泪偷烘。哭蟾宫。咒蟾宫。撕帕捶胸，簪落鬓蓬松。姐姐淑良天不佑，纸钱撒， 呼贾琏、佯怒冲。
怒吼怒骂目哭肿。斥秋桐，装懵懂。感情玩弄。罢休这、薄命娇容。客土埋香，我且做斋供。回府方将厢牖闭，薰芝叶，洗腥膻、咒永封。
红楼梦第七十回
七绝•暗伏玄机
柳絮词笺暗劫生，桃花社冷夺魂成。
绣春囊破惊雷夜，半卷湘帘掩杀声。
七排律•大观血谶
霜刃初收葬玉姿，侯门血冷泣枯枝。
梨香院锁男胎殒，藕榭盟焚凤姐辞。
帕烬犹存题赠字，香消怎续葬花诗。
鬼啼暗牖金环咽，魇压重帷绣枕欹。
孽镜台寒磷火烁，黄泉路杳麝魂迟。
理家愤掷贪蟫册，避劫深藏蚀骨词。
柳借三篙春水谶，花开一脉暮云悲。
囊收金线千重罪，石坠鸳鸯百劫基。
贾琏椎心蒙月幻。元妃托药避阳痴。
忽惊冻井尸沉坠，终化焦桐丘土碑。
Ci‑Poems Summarizing Dream of the Red Chamber (Chapters 61‑70)
By Zhang Cong’an
Chapter 61
1. He Sheng Chao · The Nitre‑Fire Alarm
Where vinegar and nitre‑spice were overturned,
The porcelain cauldron blazed and roared.
Aunt Zhao leapt back, trampling her skirt‑frill;
Her hair‑pin fell, the egret‑ornament burned.
Ping‑er unrolls the scroll,
Her icy gaze cuts through mist;
The case finds no report to the manor hall.
Bestow frost‑dew upon cicada‑locusts,
And send Golden Bracelet away.
2. Zhe Gu Tian · Ice and Charcoal in One Goblet
Frost‑ashes hidden beneath peony blooms,
Dew‑vases bury chrysanthemum clusters in secret.
Cai‑yun holds forth a rose‑patterned wine cup;
She‑yue lightly conceals the case‑files.
Smoke of gunpowder fades,
Vinegar‑stains are sealed away.
Ping‑er smiles at the crystal goblet.
Ice and charcoal cannot boil within one vessel —
Why burn the garden for a gnawing worm?
Chapter 62
1. Lin Jiang Xian · Xiang‑yun Drunk Asleep
Flower‑shadows flush red; spring slumber full,
Xiang‑yun lies drunk on fragrant green grass.
A silk kerchief wraps her jade unicorn pendant.
Butterflies and bees swarm round her dream;
Pomegranate bloom dyes fresh marks upon her.
Crimson skirt splashed with rouge powder appears,
By the Qin‑fang Bridge, cloud‑veils drift.
She blushes, sweat soaking her silken robe.
Love‑threads twist round her fingers;
Tear‑eyes burn into dusk.
2. Xing Xiang Zi · Xiang‑ling Loosens Her Sash
Her scarlet robe scorched,
Her eyes glistening with tears.
Xiang‑ling fumbles, tearing at her sash in urgency.
Pomegranate blossoms spatter blood‑red on her waist.
Pao‑yu calls softly;
Maids bring fresh garments,
She slips away from others’ gaze.
Old grief of the Zhen household,
Haunting heart and soul.
Fate decrees karmic woe none may flee.
Love‑heaven and hate‑sea melt into billowing waves.
In the Register of Ill‑Fated Maidens,
The prophecy is fulfilled;
Tears flow past all remedy.
3. Tang Duo Ling · The Feast of All Beauties
Candle‑flickers weep and glow crimson,
Laughter drifts toward the empty sky.
See Xiang‑yun asleep among fragrant blooms,
Hair dishevelled, pins askew, weak with drunkenness.
Bao‑chai meets the peony‑scented wind.
Tan‑chun casts the dice for a red throw;
Dai‑yu pities willow‑trees’ tender grace.
Alas, splendid dreams draw swiftly to ruin.
Fate turns like fleeting water flowing east;
When the Three Springs fade,
Fragrant traces perish.
Chapter 63
1. Zhe Gu Tian · Xiang‑yun Slumbering Drunk
Flower‑shadows flush red, her jade soul drunk;
Xiang‑yun lies upon stone, dream‑marks remain.
Her silk kerchief hides the golden unicorn;
Butterfly‑dust and bee‑pollen stain her crimson skirt.
Fragrant sweat soaks her,
Powder and rouge still warm;
By Qin‑fang Bridge, waters and clouds dim.
Sudden wind and rain batter pomegranate splendour,
Drenching oaths of fleeting glory, unfulfilled.
2. Yi Cong Hua · Xiang‑ling Loosens Her Sash
Scorched creases mark her scarlet skirt; tears well again and again.
She unties her sash, burning with distress.
Pomegranate‑bloom‑like blood‑rouge stains her dress.
Pao‑yu calls maids to bring fresh wrappings.
Old sorrows of the Zhen clan haunt her soul;
Ghost‑cries echo for karmic cause.
The Register of Ill‑Fated has long foretold her lot;
Cause and effect dissolve in mortal dust.
Billows surge in love‑heaven and hate‑sea,
Just as the prophetic verses foretold.
Twin lotus flowers bear frost‑faded shadows;
Old dreams can never be rekindled.
3. Yan Er Mei · Night Banquet of the Beauties
Slender shadows redden deep within the night feast;
Laughter stirs troubled hearts.
Xiang‑yun lies drunk,
Hair dishevelled and pins awry,
Dreams linger round her scented quilt.
Tan‑chun’s dice cast peach‑blossom omens;
Dai‑yu plays upon her jade lute.
Glorious dreams are brief,
Fate’s mutability turns all into poetic sighs.
Chapter 64
1. Yang Zhou Man · Xiang‑yun Drunken
Red petals shed their fragrance,
Green rock pillows her jade frame;
Xiang‑yun lies drunk on fragrant turf.
Let bees clamour and butterflies tease,
She slumbers clasping her silk kerchief.
Her scarlet skirt crumpled, rouge half‑smudged,
Pomegranate‑bloom blood‑splashed,
By clear waters her spirit shudders.
A gust of wind cools her silken gown;
Fading sunset hangs above the gate.
Recall the Zhen mansion’s former days:
Painted boats, lanterns, facing empty wine‑cups.
Pity rootless drifting lives,
Xiang‑ling’s old sorrows all dissolve to mist.
Who may escape tear‑stained marks
Set down in the Register of Ill‑Fated?
When all fair ladies scatter like stars,
Bare boughs alone confront twilight.
2. Su Zhong Qing Ling · Xiang‑ling Changes Her Skirt
Scorch‑marks suddenly stain her silken skirt;
Tears fall before she loosens her sash.
Blood‑red pomegranate hues startle her,
Like old scars from long ago.
Lamp‑shadows sink,
Moonlight dims.
A soul of flower‑burial drifts.
Maids bring fresh silk;
Incense burns in noble cauldrons —
No ransom for past mortal woes.
3. Xiao Chong Shan · Night Banquet of Beauties
Crimson candles glow at the drunken night feast.
Xiang‑yun sleeps beneath peony‑blossoms,
Exhaling orchid fragrance.
Fang‑guan dances, her pomegranate skirt torn.
The zither‑string snaps;
Ballads sing of karmic woe and grace.
Flower‑tokens prove prophecies true.
Tan‑chun draws the apricot scroll,
Farewell to the vermilion gate.
Xiang‑yun’s tears splash peach‑blossom patterns.
When the Three Springs end,
The deserted garden buries flower‑souls.
Chapter 65
1. Po Zhen Zi · The Secret Wedlock’s Ominous Verse
Wind rolls silken robes; night veils all,
Incense burns in hidden chambers where spring lies concealed.
Beyond the threshold the new bride wears a false phoenix hair‑ornament;
Beneath the curtain cold steel lurks hidden frost.
Second Master steals to perform the wedding rite.
Rouge fades soaked in tears,
Chopsticks rest upon jade plates; the feast falls silent.
Third Sister’s fiery gaze crushes rotten vermin;
Her bright sword bears witness to her fiery loyal heart.
Prophetic grief seeps through the lonely window.
2. Xing Xiang Zi · The Tragic End of the You Sisters
Her golden‑chamber makeup complete,
She sails upon a sea of karmic ruin.
Heavy gates shut; carved beam‑corbels swallow her sighs.
Dust falls on painted beams; cold dwells in brocade curtains.
One weeps, one laughs, one trembles in dread.
Scarlet skirt whirls like snow;
Her brows tempered by sharp blade.
She hurls her jade wine‑cup; torn silk thunders forth.
Ashamed of this worm‑ridden world, her soul departs;
Her heart pure amid mortal filth.
The lamp burns low, night draws near,
Tears harden into ice.
3. Die Lian Hua · Sword Witness to Three Lives
Secret vows hide poisoned wine none suspect.
Peonies bury her fragrance; silk sashes turn to curses.
Otter‑fat ointment cannot cover the new bride’s sleeve;
Worldly dust smudges her icy silk.
Cold light bursts through window‑bars.
Third Sister lifts her eyes;
Sparks of passion shake mountains and rivers.
Her eternal chaste heart roars within the blade.
In the next life, never seek entrance to noble mansions.
Chapter 66
1. Man Jiang Hong · Blood Splashes the Mandarin‑Duck Swords
Karmic sea rages wild,
Shattering mist‑moons over Water‑Chestnut Isle.
Who foretold red marriage‑cords tangled with sharp steel,
Weaving bonds of injustice and grief?
Five years of oath‑swearing reflected in a shattered mirror;
Frost‑sharp blade strikes, peach‑blossom blood gushes.
See a frail fair bone shatter in cold pool‑waters,
Icy silk torn asunder.
Feasts in gilded halls, music blares;
Noble mansion stains no water may wash clean.
Alas for the golden‑tortoise noble suitor,
In brocade cap and robe, steeped in blood.
Cold eyes behold the prison of powder and rouge;
He flees in iron garb to barren mountain caves.
Only an empty scabbard sobs beside the midnight lamp;
A lonely ghost fades away.
2. He Huo Ling · Renouncing the World at Heavenly‑Fairy Nunnery
Tears exhaust water‑chestnut boughs, withered;
Fragrance fades; the karmic mirror dims.
Five years of devotion to spring within jade chambers.
Crush a thousand peach‑petals;
Bloody rain spatters the noble household gates.
Regret for the Mandarin‑Duck swords,
Ashamed to gaze on painted‑beauty traces.
She binds her hair, dons nun’s robes, forsakes mortal bonds.
Her star‑eyes grow cold,
Cold the moon and twilight hour.
Cold the pomegranate wine‑dew,
A tattered nun’s robe entombs her lonely ghost.
3. Tian Xian Zi · Fleeing to Green‑Ridge Peak
One sword rips open the den of romantic folly.
Ten thousand beauties pour purple blood in common channels.
Sudden shock: earthen stove brews rouge,
Golden hair‑pin snaps, jade tablet shatters.
With cold gaze she flees to primeval caverns.
An iron flute blows cold; star‑essence condenses.
A crane‑feather robe shakes off scraps of golden rank.
In former life she was a stone mending heaven’s breach;
Love perishes, all karmic passion severed.
All night on empty mountains she hears the stone‑inscription echo.
Chapter 67
1. Yu Hu Die · Bao‑chai Sends Keepsake Gifts
Xue‑pan returns by ship amid piled incense;
Exotic brocades fill his chests.
She thinks of her old‑home flowers;
She divides trinkets to send gifts to Lin Dai‑yu.
Brocade‑birds stitched with fine needlework,
Clay figurines heavy with wax and grease.
She beholds white mourning garments hanging;
Cold smoke clings to the maiden’s old chamber.
2. Ding Feng Bo · Xi‑feng Lays Her Trap
Smiling she demands the casket from Wang‑er,
Melon steeped in dew lures the young servant boy.
Suddenly her face shifts, thunder bursts forth;
Beatings resound!
The magistrate’s sounding‑block cracks; night‑crows cry.
Cleverly she uses Second Sister‑You to spread hidden snares;
Shadows swallow all!
By silver lamp‑light spider‑threads of blood appear.
Carriages move quietly through moonlit lanes.
A net closes tight!
New fetters bind broken hearts in noble courtyards.
3. Xing Xiang Zi · Surging Hidden Tides
Local trinkets stir sorrow;
Mourning handkerchiefs startle the eye.
Dai‑ling weeps, burying grief in deep autumn.
Xue‑pan remains foolish and unaware;
Miss Bao‑chai weaves her schemes.
She sends Hu‑qiu clay figures,
Jin‑ling embroidery,
Guang‑ling silk.
Behind phoenix curtains rage breaks loose;
Young servants shake with terror.
She interrogates Xing‑er; sounds of tearing silk echo.
Crafty words lay snares; soft sedan‑chairs hide hooks.
One great net unfurls,
Two streams of bitter tears,
May‑flies swarm the whole city.
Chapter 68
1. Yu Lin Ling · Luring Her Into the Mansion Trap
Green curtain hangs half‑drawn;
Heavy gates creak ajar, tear‑stains mark silk kerchiefs.
Noble mansion opens as a ghost‑realm;
Fur‑cloaked lady smiles, calling her lawful elder‑sister.
A bamboo basket conceals the hare, setting the snare;
Broken‑hearted she flees to a sheltered hall.
Wiping false tears, golden nun‑pin in her hair,
She opens her fanged mouth to curse fortune‑stars.
Thunder bursts in the Ning‑fu household;
Ornaments fly scattering amid shattered halls.
She rolls upon ground wailing, begging pardon;
Rouge‑stained faces scratched and torn, shouting insults.
Ancestor spirits above!
Secret wedlock defies heaven, a sin worthy of death.
Cold eyes watch puppets pulled by threads,
Midnight candles burn silver wax.
2. Zui Hua Yin · Beauty Trapped in the Wolf’s Den
Warm chamber receives her; bitter tears choke her throat.
“Together we serve our lord, happy as wives should be.”
Secretly vicious servants surround her;
Poison brews in food and drink,
Abortion‑inducing apricot fruit presented with smiles.
Qiu‑tong curses through nights; pounding loom‑weights answer.
Moon shines down on the well where gold may be swallowed.
Embroidered chambers lock a fading soul;
Wind drifts through banana gauze,
Ghost‑songs echo among pagoda‑tree mists.
3. Yuan San San · Humiliation in Ning‑fu
Sorrowful hall; brocade quilts shroud a corpse‑robe.
Hair dishevelled, gold ornaments sink down.
Jealous Phoenix screams, tearing embroidered robes;
Spitting scorn at beast‑like kin and official kinsmen.
Second Sister‑You trembles like a shivering bird.
Karmic woe arose — who would pull her from drowning grief?
Sins pile deep and heavy.
She forces bitter smiles,
Bone‑searing icy tones cut deep.
Chapter 69
1. Shui Long Yin · Gold Ornament Swallowed Beneath the Moon
Autumn‑Tong’s blade whetted in secret;
Blood splashes deep‑closed noble courtyards.
Rouge wiped clean away,
The unborn male child destroyed;
Hatred condenses in pearl‑tears.
Tormenting words pierce like awls,
By night her bones are gouged with grief;
Behind painted curtains she draws near death.
See gold trinket swallowed beneath moon‑glow;
Choking sobs cut short,
Words stuck in her throat,
Drunk amid blooming flowers.
Before the Karmic‑Mirror altar her blue robe stands;
Clear ice reflects her frame, cold spirits offer sacrifice.
Phoenix hair‑pin slips askew,
Smiling she hides serpent’s venom;
Mugwort‑smoke burns filth away.
She rages against dark heaven;
Crimson‑fragrance treads the ghost‑road,
Red sand glistens with tears.
Half‑burned silk kerchief still remains,
Shrouding her corpse, soaked with rouge‑tears.
2. Bo Xing · Death by Swallowing Gold
The pool of tears runs dry.
Behind embroidered doors spider‑silk twists and knots.
Qiu‑tong spits insults; sacrificial paper burned morning and night.
Rude servants serve mouldy food and bitter broth.
Before her mirror, wasted bones wear flower‑ornaments;
Blood of the unborn infant soaks her quilt’s snow‑white silk.
Hear rats gnaw carved beams,
Crows cry above dry wells,
Counting midnight waning moon.
She clutches her golden ear‑ring;
Coldness settles within her breast.
Slowly she swallows the rotten evil of noble halls.
Seek not the road to Yellow‑Spring underworld;
Fragrance of rouge fades away.
In next life never trust vermilion gate nobility.
Cold bones buried beneath grass.
A scrap of silk kerchief lingers,
Rouge‑scent sharp as blade‑edge.
Even wrapped in death‑shroud,
Phoenix’s poisoned heat still clings to her.
3. Jiang Cheng Mei Hua Yin · The Fake Weeping Riddle at the Funeral
She howls false grief beside the coffin, tears feigned.
Cursing the moon‑palace even as she weeps for it.
Tearing kerchiefs, beating her breast,
Hair‑pins tumble from disordered tresses.
“Good‑natured sister, heaven showed no mercy!”
She scatters paper spirit‑money,
Shouts at Jia‑Lian, feigning furious passion.
She roars and rages, eyes swollen with pretend weeping;
Rebukes Qiu‑tong, feigning ignorance.
Love has been mocked and played with.
Enough of this ill‑fated beauty.
Her remains buried in foreign soil;
“I shall offer sacrifices for her.”
Returning home she shuts the chamber windows tight,
Burns agalloch incense, washes away blood‑reek,
Curses the evil sealed forevermore.
Chapter 70
Seven‑Character Quatrain · Hidden Ominous Hints
Willow‑catkin verses birth secret doom,
Peach‑Blossom Society fades, death‑portents take shape.
When the embroidered silk pouch bursts, thunder roars by night;
Half‑rolled Xiang‑lian screen muffles sounds of slaughter.
Seven‑Line Long Poem · Bloody Prophecies of the Grand‑View Garden
Sharp blades sheathed, fair forms laid to rest;
Noble mansion runs cold, weeping over withered boughs.
Pear‑Fragrance Courtyard sealed, unborn boy perished;
Lotus‑Pavilion alliance burns, Xi‑feng’s speeches broken.
Charred kerchiefs still bear old inscribed verses;
Fragrance fades — how continue flower‑burial poems?
Ghost‑cries behind dark window‑slits; gold rings swallowed by moonlight.
Nightmares weigh heavy behind embroidered pillows.
Karmic‑Mirror altar cold, will‑o’‑the‑wisp glimmers;
Yellow‑Spring road far, fragrant souls linger slow.
Managing household affairs, she hurls down records of greedy worms;
Escaping doom, she hides bone‑eating verses deep.
Willows draw three fathoms of spring‑water prophecies;
Blossoms breathe forth twilight‑cloud sorrow.
The silk pouch gathers thousand‑fold sins woven in gold thread;
Fallen stone of Mandarin‑Duck love lays the base for hundred‑fold calamities.
Jia‑Lian’s heart torn beneath moon‑illusions;
Yuan‑fei sends medicine to shun sun‑lit madness.
Sudden terror: corpse sinks in frozen well‑waters;
All turns to charred paulownia and mound‑stone epitaphs.
乾坤铸韵，笔凿红楼万卷千秋；星芒振藻，墨擎盛世文坛独占鳌头之鸿篇榷论
点评撰稿／紫澜书钺
鸿蒙剖判以降，文枢悬于昊穹，文脉奔涌若沧溟洪涛，历百代星霜而薪火不绝。张从安先生以旷代之襟怀，挟千年文梦，握椽笔而叩太玄，揽盛世云光而铺展辞卷，跳出寻常评红的桎梏，不以训诂考据为桎梏，不以闲情咏叹为归旨，融词林正韵之律度，汇稗官红楼之幽谶，以一阕阕宫商铿锵的词章，重构石头记的轮回幻境。乃是以词为斧，凿开红楼万象的玄牝之门；以韵为舆，驮载大观园盛衰枯荣的万古沉哀，于当代文苑耸起一座独峙群流、独占鳌头的文学峰岳。
夫《红楼梦》一书，本是情天孽海的鸿蒙寓言，假儿女闺阁之琐记，写王朝世运之消长。金玉木石的痴缠，钗黛湘纨的零落，侯门朱户的繁华倾颓，皆藏于字里行间的微言奥义。百二十回的叙事脉络之下，暗流潜涌，劫数环生，第六十一回到第七十回这十卷文本，更是全书气运转捩的关键隘口。私窃茯苓，府闱讼起，是内宅祸乱萌发之萌兆；湘云酣眠芍药裀，群芳夜宴掣花签，是盛景回光返照的残焰；尤氏姐妹玉碎香销，利刃淬尽红颜血泪，是浊世侯门蚀骨的罪孽；王熙凤机心罗织，巧设圈套，二尤归于尘土，大观园的绮罗幻梦，一寸寸被现实的霜锋割裂。书中之人，或痴、或黠、或烈、或愚，沉浮于命运的棋局，困锁在朱门的樊笼，悲欢离合，幽恨沉冤，纷纭杂沓，千头万绪。寻常读家，只见儿女情长的悲欢，只观楼台宴乐的浮奢，难以穿透表层的绮罗，勘破文字背后乾坤消长的隐微机锋。
解读红楼，向来分作两途。其一为朴学考据，爬梳版本源流，钩稽家世掌故，碎拆篇章，以求索故事背后的史实本源，却往往遗失文本之中灵动的情志气韵；其二为感性咏叹，感闺红薄命之凄怆，悼大观园凋零之悲凉，落笔多伤春悲秋，辞意流于浅近，格局拘于闺阁方寸，难以撑开囊括天地的宏阔视界。古往今来，以词论红者不在少数，大多截取片景，吟咏一人一事，撷取葬花、题帕、海棠结社诸般雅事，抒一己之感怀，辞藻虽工，然篇章零散，脉络断裂，不能将数十回跌宕辗转的情节，纳于倚声格律的体系之内，做贯通性的整体性熔铸。要么拘守单阕小令，眼界局促；要么徒逞辞藻华丽，义理空虚，望红楼沧海而仅掬一瓢，面对石头记包罗万象的宇宙，终究力有未逮。
张从安先生之所作《红楼梦》第六十一回至七十回综括词，迥然异于古今一众红题词作。先生博通词林正韵，熟谙诸般词牌体制，贺圣朝之清劲，鹧鸪天之沉郁，临江仙之疏旷，满江红之悲壮，雨霖铃之凄恻，水龙吟之浩茫，信手驱遣，各得其宜。他并非简单摘录书中故事情节做复述描摹，不是把小说白话转译为文言韵语，而是站在乾坤流转的宏大维度，勘透文本底层潜藏的谶纬、因果、劫运，把人物个体的命运悲欢，和侯门世家气运崩颓、盛世虚华归于幻灭的大势紧紧绾合。每一回数之下，分列数阕词章，分剖一案、一事、一人物之魂魄，分合相济，经纬交织，六十回至七十回之间所有风波：厨下纷争、私赃疑狱、芍药醉眠、群芳宴谶、尤三姐仗剑明志、柳湘莲遁迹荒山、尤二姐陷罗网吞金殒命，一桩桩，一件件，悉被椽笔收纳于格律宫商之中。字里行间，既有闺阁脂粉的幽泣，亦有山河世运的浩叹，小至于钗裙罗带的焦痕簪落，大至于朱楼倾圮、万艳同悲的末世劫波，巨细无遗，表里俱彻。
观《贺圣朝·硝火惊变》《鹧鸪天·冰炭同盅》二阕，对应六十一回厨房风波，茯苓霜失窃，府内流言蜂起，仆婢牵连，罗织构陷，内宅已是暗流汹汹。世俗读此回，多半只看见一场仆妇间的纠葛闹剧，看见平儿处事的宽和机敏。但先生落笔，以“泼翻艾醋硝香处。轰燃瓷釜”起笔，以硝火轰燃作喻，把一场看似细碎的府闱私衅，喻作引燃整个贾府祸乱的引线。硝火，本是焚物摧垣之物，内宅的嫌隙猜忌便是府第内部潜藏的火药，艾醋纷扰，看似琐屑的妇人之争，内里却藏满倾轧、贪私、构陷的戾气。“赵姨惊跳踩裙裾，落簪烧鹭”，具象描摹乱象纷扰之态，簪珥零落，衣袂仓皇，繁华表象之下乱象已然燎原。“平儿展卷，冰眸扫雾，案情无传府。且将霜露赠蝉蛉，塞了金钏去。”词人洞见平儿处置此案，并非仅仅息事宁人的世故圆通，而是于浊雾迷乱的牢笼之中，以一己微薄清明，周旋于满府贪嗔痴妄之间。后续“炭冰原难同觚煮，何苦焚园争蠹虫”，更是振聋发聩。冰炭不可同器，正邪难可共存，阖府上下为些许微利，互相倾轧，如同蠹虫啃噬梁柱，亲手焚毁自家园林基业。词人跳出是非对错的世俗评判，直点世家衰败之根源：大厦之倾，非一朝一夕外寇摧毁，实乃府内蠹虫内耗，自掘丘墓。寻常咏此段，止于赞美平儿聪慧，而此文直探祸乱本源，目光穿透帘栊，照见朱门内里腐朽的根柢，立意之深，迥出凡流。
迨及六十二、六十三回，芍药酣眠，群芳夜宴，是大观园最绚烂回光。湘云醉卧，历来诗文多爱描摹娇憨烂漫，赏少女风流情态。先生数阕词作，却不单单沉醉于芳华艳景。“蝶蜂争绕梦，榴艳透新痕”“忽惊风雨摧榴艳，淋湿繁华誓未真”。榴花似火，艳色灼灼，却暗藏摧落之兆。繁华酣醉只是刹那幻梦，风雨转瞬即来，誓言皆属虚妄。写香菱，“茜袂焦焦，泪目昭昭”“甄家旧事，魂牵梦绕。却道评、冤孽难逃”，没有只写香菱当下的悲欢，而是溯源甄府覆灭的旧劫，把人物个体命运，归入薄命司既定判词的因果轮回。群芳夜宴，世人所见是烛火笙歌，诗酒欢娱。词人却书：“却惊那、繁梦华穷。命运无常东逝水，三春去，落芳踪。”烛影摇红，笑语喧阗的盛宴，却是一场告别式的预演。花签之上，句句皆是谶语，欢声笑语的背后，是群芳离散倒计时。先生以词笔拨开宴乐的绮幔，看见欢歌之下遍地哀音。盛世繁花盛放之时，零落的结局早已写定。不以美景娱目，而借盛景写悲亡，于欣欣向荣的表象之下洞见消亡之预兆，此等识见，非浅学之士所能企及。
继而六十五、六十六回，尤三姐、柳湘莲一段，是全书中最为凛冽悲壮的笔墨。偷娶私宅，凤幕暗藏杀机；三姐明眸似火，傲骨嶙峋，以一剑清贞，斩断尘缘幻梦。古往今来吟咏尤三姐，多是怜惜红颜刚烈，慨叹良缘成空。先生《破阵子·偷娶悲谶》《蝶恋花·剑证三生》《满江红·雪溅鸳鸯剑》层层递进，境界层层抬升。“槛外新人簪假凤，榻侧寒锋隐冷霜”，点破偷娶背后，杀机早已潜伏；“三姐横波摧腐蠹，一剑明心照烈肠”，赞其剑锋所向，不止是证一己贞洁，更是以血肉之躯对抗侯门腐蠹污浊。“万古贞心凝剑吼。来生休向侯门叩”，一语千钧，不止悲叹一人的悲剧，更是对整个腐朽侯门体系发出沉痛诘问。《满江红·雪溅鸳鸯剑》气魄尤为雄阔，“孽海风湍，忽破散、菱洲烟月。谁可料、赤绳青锋缠，系成冤结”，笔力苍茫如大江奔涌。鸳鸯双剑，本寄一世盟誓，反倒化作殒命凶器，红丝姻缘化为血光冤孽。玉魄销亡，柳湘莲看破风月虚妄，斩断尘缘，遁入荒山洪荒。“一剑捅开风月窟。万艳同渠流紫血”，何等撼人心魄！不局限于儿女情爱恩怨，将个人情殇上升为“万艳同悲”的群体浩劫。侯门风月窟，看似温柔绮丽，实则吞噬无数女子性命，万千红颜，尽付浊流。此等格局，挣脱才子佳人的旧套，乾坤眼界，洞彻时代之弊。
六十七至六十九回，凤姐布设天罗地网，赚取尤二姐入园，谗言暗害，恶奴相逼，堕胎吞金，香销玉殒，步步寒栗，字字霜雪。《定风波•凤姐设彀》写王熙凤机阱千重，“巧借二姨铺暗阱。吞影！银釭照处血蛛丝”，灯烛之下，罗网密织，看不见刀兵，却处处杀机弥漫。《雨霖铃•赚入园彀》描摹虚情假意哄骗，入园之后便是鬼域牢笼，假泪盈腮，唇舌如刀。《薄幸•吞金断魂》写尤二姐绝境，“对菱花、枯骨簪花，男胎血浸罗衾雪”，朱门绮户，竟成炼狱。锦衣玉食的侯门深院，没有刀斧加身，却以谗言、冷辱、苛待，缓缓消磨生命。“算来生莫依朱阙”，是亡魂泣血的警世之语。先生的词章，不做简单善恶褒贬，既写尤二姐凄婉薄命，亦写王熙凤被欲望裹挟之下阴狠机心，更看见整个家族环境，滋养出这般倾轧残害的土壤。不是一人之恶，乃是制度环境酿成重重劫厄。《江城梅花引•哭灵迷局》描摹凤姐灵前假意嚎啕，佯作悲戚，内里心机深藏，假哭灵帏，掩尽滔天罪孽。词笔冷峻，剥开虚伪礼教的外衣，直显内里虚伪诡谲的世相。
迄至第七十回，以七绝、七排律总束此十回变局。“柳絮词笺暗劫生，桃花社冷夺魂成。绣春囊破惊雷夜，半卷湘帘掩杀声。”桃花诗社，本是大观园风流雅集，而柳絮篇章，句句皆是漂泊零落之谶，雅事之中劫数暗生。那一首洋洋数百言之《大观血谶》，更是雄笔凌云，笼盖前面十回全部风波。“霜刃初收葬玉姿，侯门血冷泣枯枝。梨香院锁男胎殒，藕榭盟焚凤姐辞。”前后人物遭际，尽数收纳，诗律森严，意象奔迸。帕烬题诗，葬花旧咏，鬼啼暗牖，磷火荒台，元妃幻梦，冻井沉尸，种种幻象、血泪、凶兆纷至沓来。大观园盛世表象已经千疮百孔，欣欣向荣的盛景外壳之下，腐坏溃烂向内蔓延。柳絮随风，是群芳漂泊的预兆；绣春囊事发，是抄检大观园的惊雷预告。一卷七排律，为后续全书大厦崩塌埋下千钧伏笔。
综览整部综括词系列，不难窥见张从安先生学养根底之宏博。先生毕业于北京理工大学，理工的缜密逻辑，与传统诗词的感性灵秀，在其身中交融共振。故其词作，既有文人骚客的情志激荡，又有逻辑严密的架构铺排。数十阕词作，并非孤立零散的篇什，而是一套有机完整的文学体系。以词牌为梁柱，以红楼情节为砖瓦，以乾坤气运、因果谶纬为栋梁，搭建起一座红楼的词苑殿宇。每一回之内数阕分工，或叙事件波澜，或摹人物肝胆，或探因果本源；回与回之间脉络勾连，祸起内宅，盛极宴饮，烈女玉碎，冤魂殒殁，劫兆暗伏，层层递进，顺着小说气运流转而起伏跌宕。行文意象玄奥，硝火、孽海、寒锋、孽镜台、磷火、洪荒穴，诸多意象交织，虚实互渗，小说实景与神话谶纬世界彼此映照，人间侯门与情天孽海两相贯通。
古云：“文以载道，词以写心。”倚声小道，历来多被视作艳科，多用来抒写闲愁别绪。而张从安先生，拔高了词体承载的重量。他以长短句为载体，不单单复述红楼故事，而是借红楼外壳，叩问乾坤人世的大道。观其笔墨，写闺阁，却不困于闺阁；写儿女，却不止于儿女。家道盛衰之中看见世道浮沉，个体血泪之中看见群体命运。繁华欣欣向荣的表象，和幻灭凋零的宿命，两相映照；盛世画卷的绮丽铺陈，底下涌动劫变洪波。所谓“乾坤文坛梦笔千年”，正是谓此：千年文脉流淌至今，先生执梦笔，接续前贤未竟之业，在当代文坛拓开一条独一无二的研红路径。古之评红，有脂砚斋之批，条分缕析，随文点悟；有后世诸多论著，宏论滔滔。而以成套系列词章，按回统括，融叙事、写人、探谶、论道于一炉，如此鸿制，前修未见，堪称独步文坛，足以独占鳌头。
当代文坛，浮华喧嚣盛行，不少作品追逐流量，趋附浅白通俗，辞意浅薄，追求一眼可读，放弃意蕴幽深。很多诗词创作，模仿网络范式，辞藻堆砌，内核空洞，少有沉潜古籍、深耕韵学，敢于造幽深玄远境界的创作者。张从安先生沉潜古诗词研修三十余载，创作两千余首诗词，深耕词林正韵，甚至自创《寒楼载影》《烟波江上听风吟》新词牌，足见其不甘随波逐流，力求开拓新境的创作追求。观其红楼综括词，遣词造境深奥幽邃，不肯俯就浅俗，读之需要沉下心神，穿透文字表层，去体悟意象背后的隐喻。每一个典故，每一处物象，皆有所指，草蛇灰线，伏脉千里。他不迎合快餐式阅读，坚守传统文学的厚重与深邃，于浮躁世风之中，固守文学的高峻山峰。
先生一身多能，书法丹青，丝竹音律，无不涉猎。艺术本同源，书画音乐的修养，浸润其诗词骨血。故其词作，既有文字的跌宕顿挫，又有画面的磅礴铺展，兼有乐曲回环往复的韵律感。读贺圣朝、鹧鸪天，如闻短笛裂云；读满江红、水龙吟，则如同铜琶铁板，惊涛擂岸；读雨霖铃、薄幸，又似寒瑟低鸣，幽咽凄怆。声调随内容情绪流转，悲欢、怒慨、浩叹、悲悯，各得其声。再观其履历，诸多文学赛事摘得桂冠，骈文《金陵赋》被誉骈俪巅峰，诸多篇章散见于海内外数十家文学平台，身兼数十文学社团顾问、主审之职，得“九州文化人才库首席十大院士卓越文学成就奖”，盛名绝非幸至，乃是数十年皓首穷文，千锤百炼磨砺而来。
然则这一组红楼综括词，其价值，又不能仅仅以奖项荣誉衡量。奖项是外界的褒扬，而文本自身的生命力，方为不朽。《红楼梦》是中华民族文化瑰宝，无数人解读，无数人演绎，但是大多落入固定范式。张从安先生另辟鸿蒙，以系列词章构建一套属于韵文体系的红学阐解。读此一套词作，仿佛换一副眼光重读第六十一回到七十回：不再仅仅看故事的起承转合，更能看见故事背后涌动的劫运机锋。府内小小纷争，是大厦将倾的萌芽；盛宴笙歌，是灭亡的预告；烈女仗剑，是浊世里面仅存的冰雪肝胆；侯门罗网吞害红颜，是礼教华裳之下累累血痕。繁华欣欣向荣的大观园，是一幅绚烂盛世画卷，画卷背面，却写满毁灭的谶语。梦笔挥洒，对接千年文脉，以词沟通古今，让千年文坛乾坤气象，在笔底重新苏醒。
张先生此作，大处可揽乾坤气运盛衰，小处可察裙钗鬓簪泪痕。叙事则波澜毕现，写人则魂魄跃然，探理则洞破虚妄，抒怀则悲慨万端。宏大而不空洞，深奥而不晦涩，辞藻繁丽而不堆砌，格律谨严而不受束缚。一阕接一阕，回回相扣，篇篇相续，如同展开一部韵文版红楼十回史诗。放眼当代同题材创作，这般体系完整、立意玄深、气魄磅礴的鸿篇，寥寥无几，确然独树一帜，鳌头独占。
文脉长河滔滔东流，一代代文人接续执笔。前人已经写尽红楼万千情致，想要再出新意，何其艰难。若要跳出樊笼，必要有迥异常人的眼界，要有沉厚的学养，要有敢于开辟新境的胆魄。张从安先生兼具三者，梦笔挥毫，叩响红楼幻海的玄门。不拾旧人唾余，不循世俗窠臼，以词为器，勘破情天孽海重重迷障。他把小说叙事、神话谶纬、世道兴衰、人性幽微尽数熔炼于宫商韵语。文字幽深，意象苍茫，时而风雷激荡，时而寒月泣魂。于纸上铺展那一幅虚实交织的盛世画卷，看见欣欣向荣表象之下，命运劫数暗潮滚滚。千年文坛的乾坤文梦，不在故纸堆的故步自封，而在于后来者，敢于以新的笔墨，重新解读不朽经典。这套综括词，便是当代诗词界回馈《红楼梦》的一份厚重答卷，足以屹立于当代咏红文学之林，历岁月磨洗，而光华长存！
